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Floating Leaf ([personal profile] floatingleaf) wrote2006-01-07 07:57 pm
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new A/L ficlet!!!

OK, I have finally managed to come up with a suitable Christmas present for [livejournal.com profile] akashaelfwitch.;D Better late than never, as the wise men (& women) say. I hope it is to her liking.;)

And well... not sure if that's something I should admit, but it was actually inspired by a screensaver called "Midnight Lake". Yes. A screensaver. I really need therapy. *sigh*

Also, I do realize that bathing Legolas is one of the immortal cliches of the fandom. So forgive me, Akasha, if I have not exactly invented something entirely new here.;) Still, I will shamelessly admit that I am quite pleased with how this little thing turned out.:D

Author: Floating Leaf
Title: Revelation
Pairing: Aragorn/Legolas
Rating: strong R
Summary: Legolas takes a bath, and Aragorn's voyeuristic tendencies get an unexpected reward.;)
Warning: Handle with caution - contents may be hot.;P
Disclaimer: Only in my sick mind, not Tolkien's, does that ever happen - I promise.:)



The air is so balmy tonight. The surface of the little lake is shimmering softly in the moonlight. I crouch down among the reeds, holding my breath as Legolas steps naked into the water. I had hidden here as soon as we decided to stop for the night, knowing he would come to bathe. I'd much rather watch him unnoticed than join him and be embarrassed by revealing my very obvious reaction to the sight of his divine body. Let him tease me later, making fun of my supposed reluctance to indulge in personal hygiene. I'd rather he joked about that than about human males' inability to control their raging lust.

But how can I be blamed for lusting, when my eyes behold such perfection? Flawless skin stretched over taut muscles, grace and strength in effortless harmony. He wades in up to his thighs and splashes himself lazily, tilting his head back and shaking out his unbraided hair. Then he turns, so that his back is towards me, and bends down to wash his face. I bite back a gasp at the sight displayed before me. If he only knew what exquisite torture this is!

As soon as I think that, he turns again, facing me, and swipes his hands languidly all over his body. Smiling dreamily and biting his lower lip, he starts tweaking his rosy nipples. As I watch in utter astonishment, the slender column of flesh between his legs begins to rise, pointing towards me. Then his pale fingers close around it and he moans softly. I am in agony. I had no idea he ever indulged in such shameless, lonely pleasures. Just whose touch is he craving, I wonder, as his other hand longingly caresses the smooth torso. And will I be able to hold myself back and endure the tantalizing spectacle without revealing my presence?

As soon as I think that, he takes a few steps forward, in my direction, and calls out, with a hint of amusement in his voice: "You can stop hiding now, Aragorn!"

I gasp, blushing to the roots of my hair, and stammer: "You... you... you knew I was here?!?"

"Of course!", he answers with an indulgent smile. "For whom, do you think, am I putting on this little show?"

Before the sudden revelation has enough time to sink in, he adds: "Take your clothes off, quickly, and come here. I need someone to wash my back."

He winks, and it is suddenly very obvious that he will let me do much more than that. I have never yet managed to undress so fast. No longer ashamed of my intense arousal, I stand before him. He looks at me coyly, a slight flush creeping over his alabaster skin. Then he splashes water at me and dives under the surface. I dive right after him, and soon I hold him firmly in my arms. He squirms and swats at me playfully, but does not pull back. He feels like wet silk, and his heart is beating fast.

"So you knew, you wicked elf", I growl, pressing my whole body against him."You knew very well what you were doing to me!..."

"Mmmmm... I certainly do know what I want you to do to me", he purrs, lifting a leg and rubbing his smooth thigh enticingly against my hip.

"And what would that be?", I manage to articulate as my hands move down his back.

"I want to be thoroughly and completely ravished", he whispers hotly in my ear, gasping as I squeeze his firm buttocks. "I want you to pierce me with this throbbing rod of human flesh until I scream your name", he breathes, while his hand sneaks between our bodies to grasp my eager cock.

"Legolas!...", I exclaim in giddy wonder. "Not in my wildest dreams have I thought you capable of such passion!..."

"Only for you", he murmurs, winding his long legs about my waist. Blinded by the sudden rush of desire, I devour his panting mouth. There is no stopping me now. I will have him. I carry him out of the water, never breaking the contact, and we collapse in a tangle onto the soft grass. But even as I claim him fiercely, fulfilling his ardent wish, in my deepest heart of hearts I know already that it is I who has been claimed tonight - body and soul. Forever.

[identity profile] agrotora.livejournal.com 2006-01-08 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
Ngggh.....

Dies.....

(But happily)

I hope you don't mind me crashing the pressie...

Two lines I loved the best:
'blushing to the roots of my hair' (LOL) and:
'But even as I claim him... I know already that it is I who has been claimed tonight.' (sigh)

Excellent fic! Just what I needed tonight- 'Kasha, too! She is *so* gonna love this!

[identity profile] floatingleaf.livejournal.com 2006-01-08 03:34 am (UTC)(link)
Glad to see you here. And I sincerely hope your death is temporary.;)

I'm sure Akasha doesn't mind sharing her present.:P By the way, I hope you don't mind me using this gorgeous icon - you are credited in the comments.

She is *so* gonna love this!

I expect she might.;) Fortunately, me and Akasha both like our A/L served the same way.;P

[identity profile] crimsonsenya.livejournal.com 2006-01-08 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
*melts*
Man-on-elf love! It's been quite a while since I read them. Actually, yours must have been the last time as Romi hasn't updated the Sins for some time either. "And hey who cares if A wathcing L bathing is a cliche. A wedding trip to Paris is a cliche and it is still as great. :D

I loved this sentence:
He feels like wet silk, and his heart is beating fast. The contrast between the mental associations of wet and silk was delicious.

[identity profile] floatingleaf.livejournal.com 2006-01-08 08:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Hello, and thank you!:) It's good to know you still like some man-on-elf occasionally.;)

And Romi's Sins have been a huge source of inspiration for me. I hope she does go on with the story, it would really hurt to leave it unfinished... *sigh*

[identity profile] niennas-dreams.livejournal.com 2006-01-10 05:12 pm (UTC)(link)
*happy sigh* Beautiful. :D I love them, I really do. Thank you.

[identity profile] floatingleaf.livejournal.com 2006-01-10 06:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank YOU for popping on over here and reading. And I'm so glad you enjoyed.;D

[identity profile] niennas-dreams.livejournal.com 2006-01-10 06:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm trying to catch up. ;) And I did enjoy, very much so. *hugs*

Is there any chance you can link me to Lassegalen's site? I lost all my links when my computer crashed. *sigh*

[identity profile] floatingleaf.livejournal.com 2006-01-10 07:07 pm (UTC)(link)
I am at work at the moment, so I'd rather not pay a visit to the lovely Elisa and her impressive harem... LOL. But when I get home tonight, sure.:) (for you it will be tomorrow, though)

[identity profile] illuins-lair.livejournal.com 2010-02-05 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
"For whom, do you think, am I putting on this little show?"
Nnnnggghh...!!!! *flails*

"He feels like wet silk, and his heart is beating fast."
*breathes*
Ok, that sentence floored me, thankyou. =D

Grgeous, absolutely gorgeous... Seductive!Legolas and Voyeur!Aragorn have just made my day a little hotter!

[identity profile] floatingleaf.livejournal.com 2010-02-06 05:20 am (UTC)(link)
Seductive!Legolas and Voyeur!Aragorn are my favorite FPS flavor.:D I'm so glad you enjoyed. *snuggles*

*snogsies*

[identity profile] illuins-lair.livejournal.com 2010-02-08 03:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, I totally approve of this pairing - I used to read almost exclusively A/L and I don´t know if it has to do with the whole interspecies-allure, the beauty/hotness-appeal, plain subtext or just the damn chemistry..

I´m such a Legolas-girl.. *pets my inner!elf-self*

Re: *snogsies*

[identity profile] floatingleaf.livejournal.com 2010-02-09 02:37 am (UTC)(link)
I don´t know if it has to do with the whole interspecies-allure, the beauty/hotness-appeal, plain subtext or just the damn chemistry

I think it's all of the above.:) Plus the powerful romanticism of 'forbidden love', of course (unless you solve that particular problem by writing mpreg, LOL).

Hmmm... how about your 'inner!elf-self' and my 'inner!elf-self' go on a date?... We can have some tequila (or whatever it is that elves get drunk on, lol) and chat about possessive filthy rangers...:D


Re: *snogsies*

[identity profile] illuins-lair.livejournal.com 2010-02-12 09:55 pm (UTC)(link)
*marries you in elven cloaks with nekkid bridesmaids and tequilaweddingcake and spies on filthy rangers and flies off on a happy!sparkly pony*

[identity profile] wiccaqueen.livejournal.com 2010-04-30 02:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh so wonderfully hot! Hmm delicious! XD

[identity profile] floatingleaf.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! <333

And I absolutely love your icon!!! *is hypnotized by the seductive eyelashes*