poem

[floatingleaf]

So, today is the last day of April - the Poetry Month. Which I have totally neglected to mention so far. I just wasn't in the mood for poetry, I guess - until I saw a gorgeous Aragorn manip made by akashaelfwitch as a "poetry prompt" at the Adult_Viggo Yahoo!Group. It stole my breath away, and ispired me to put into words what I believe an intimate companion of this glorious specimen of mankind might be thinking while watching him take his rest...







BELOVED

so many names they gave you
so many identities
so many paths to tread
and duties to fulfill
within the short span of your mortal existence

and you accomplished it all
becoming who you were born to be
the ruler
the healer
the saviour

yet here, in our bed
stripped of all your appointed glories
you offer me the only one I truly care about:
your naked body
and your passionate heart
still beating fiercely
from the exertions of our fervent embrace

here your only name is beloved
and your only duty
to take what is given freely
and return my eagerness to please
in equal measure

rest now, meleth nin
and worry not
I shall give you a moment of peace
before I demand your attention once more
with my willful mouth
just to see that glorious, carefree smile again
and that soft expression of wonder
the only part of you
that never changed
since you first saw me in the Hall of Fire
as a little boy

Comments

Beautiful!

[crowdaughter.livejournal.com]

Both the poem and the manip are very lovely! The poem fits the manipulation (and vice versa) perfectly. Thank you, floating leaf and Akasha, for theis wonderful team work. Floating Leaf, your poem will surely stay with me for a long time!

Aislynn

Re: Beautiful!

[floatingleaf.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for expressing your appreciation. The manip indeed bewitched me so badly that it is now on my desktop..;D

[numenora.livejournal.com]

Wow! I can't come up with much more than that; especially, nothing as eloquent and sexy and lovely as this poem. Thank you so much! *grins & sighs* Patty.

[floatingleaf.livejournal.com]

Thank YOU for reading and giving such lovely feedback. It's my pleasure to share these little snippets of wistful imagination... *sigh*

[akashaelfwitch.livejournal.com]

*jaw drops*
that is an incredible poem! *my* icky manip inspired that? WOW!! *eyes wide*

You have captured Legolas' voice well, I can picture him looking over at his lover, as he silently contemplates these thoughts...they are bittersweet but full of love...every word spoken from the elf's mouth is one of adoration and devotion.

This was just beautiful

Akasha

[floatingleaf.livejournal.com]

Thank you darling. I am really happy you liked it so much. And your manip is NOT icky... LOL. How could it be, if it inspired so much adoration and devotion? ;)

[akashaelfwitch.livejournal.com]

*blush*
you are way too kind
*hugs you tight*

Akasha

[akashaelfwitch.livejournal.com]

PS may I post a link to this on my LJ? :)

[floatingleaf.livejournal.com]

OF COURSE you can... *tickles you*

[akashaelfwitch.livejournal.com]

*ahhh stop!*
Im way too ticklish!!
:D

[floatingleaf.livejournal.com]

*tickles you some more, just because* ;P

[akashaelfwitch.livejournal.com]

Ah..stop it...*giggles*

BTW Im free this Saturday :)
want to do something?

Bed and Breakfast(?!)

[ana-lib-elf.livejournal.com]

Delightful musings --- just the right rhythm and tone --- " I demand your attention once more with my willful mouth" Oooo, so *hot* and so very loving. Thank you for sharing this location at L/A Slash, it's a pleasure to read the pretty words and *view* the tasty manip!! (thank you talented Akasha!) *off for yummy dreams* ANA

Re: Bed and Breakfast(?!)

[floatingleaf.livejournal.com]

Thank YOU for the delightful feedback. You never fail to make a writer smile.:)

[phantomberkanna.livejournal.com]

Lovely!! A perfect combination of words and visual.

[floatingleaf.livejournal.com]

Thank you! The 'visual' was just too inspiring...;)

[slashfairy.livejournal.com]

here via Akasha, and moved to tears by this. thank you, floating leaf.

[floatingleaf.livejournal.com]

Thank YOU for the lovely comment. It means a hell of a lot to know that I could move someone so deeply. *blinks in disbelief*

Beloved

[ladyana5.livejournal.com]

Just wanted to say this was wonderful, dear! Very passionate and sweet at the same time! Thanks for sharing!

Re: Beloved

[floatingleaf.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

[illuins-lair.livejournal.com]

*clutches heart*

This is heartbreakingly beautiful and..yeah...

*sniffles*

The manip is GUH! and omfg I think I should start reading fps again =D

[floatingleaf.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much!... *beams*

I think I should start reading fps again

I think that might be a good idea.;)

[illuins-lair.livejournal.com]

*nods*

omg.. where did all my elf!pr0n years go?! *flails from nostalgia*

I´ve postponed the return of them for far to long.

*snork*